No, you’re not right. The looming recession affects millennial women too — something you left out in your article — and we are not gold diggers out to get some rich dude. As long as we’re relying on anecdotal evidence: I’ve been the breadwinner in my household for years while my husband makes less money than I, and I know hundreds of millennial women who know that millennial men are also broke and don’t shame them for it! Also, a lot of us are not single…

This line reveals that you’re really speaking to other men in this story. Just a thought, maybe you should either broaden your audience or at least make it clear that you’re talking only to men in the intro.